Rosie I can prepare for this computer application class over these 9 weeks because I would hope to learn all of the computer class materials and how to do new things on the computer I didn’t know before. I will also be able to learn more things for the projects we are going to be doing. I will do my best to learn all the new materials. I would like to learn how to skype my foreign exchange student.
Marin I can prepare for the 21st century in this class in these 9 weeks by learning more about technology. I would like to know how to use the internet better and how to write on blogs. I want to be more efficient with computers. I also would like to learn more about skypeing with friends and using/making widgets. I can be responsible for my own learning by asking questions and paying attention.
Anna-I can prepare for the up-coming nine weeks by listening and trying my best to understand all the material. Also I can try to find new ways to learn what is being taught. I also would like to Skype with someone.
Jordan I can prepare for the twenty first century in computer applications class by learning how to work on excel. I will try to learn everything that is taught in this class. I would like to work with i movie and garage band.
I can prepare for the next nine weeks by open my mind to new technology and ideas. I can try to learn more about the Internet and some of its uses. I can also learn how to use the Internet more efficiently. That is some of the things I hope to learn in this class.
Keiyah I can prepare for the 21st century by learning more things about computers. I want to learn the information we talk about during this 9 weeks because, it can help me with things I do for school and when I get older it might help with my job. I would like to learn how to search better on the internet and to skype. I think it would be cool to be able to talk to people from around the world.
Jessica 1.I can prepare by, learning new ways of how technology works. In this 21st century technology is so much different. I would like to learn new ways to explore the internet. I would like to use skype to chat with people across seas.
Laura I cannot expect to lean back on something else like at Mc. Donald’s or something because that may be replaced with technology. Anything can be replaced with technology so when I get a job I will have to appreciate it and not take advantage of it.
Emma I can prepare for this computer application class over these 9 weeks by listening, learning, and following instructions so that I know what to do and how to prepare myself because a lot of jobs in the 21st century include working with computers or other kinds of technology.I want to learn how to skype with people on a different continent too.
Keely I can prepare by telling you that I want to learn more about working with word documents or power points and seeing what all they have to offer. I’d like to learn anything and everything about computers. I don’t know anything.I can raise my hand and ask a whole lot of questions.
Megan I would like to learn more about computers, blogging, skyping, and the Internet. I would like to learn how to skype to talk to my cousin in the air force. I would like to learn how to create a blog so I can have my own blog. I think that these things will help me a lot.
Adri, I would like to learn about things that we would have to learn in high school. I think that if we learned some of it now it would be easy on us when we are in high school. Also blogs. I think that blogs are very interesting and I would like it if we could fined out exactly what they are. Also think we could skype and what it is all about. I would really like to be able to skype with my family that I never get to see.
Sierra I would want to learn about blogs, because I’m not sure how to use them, and I might need to in the future maybe. I want to see what there like, and if they are fun. Some people say we have to use them later in life so I would like to learn how to use them now. I would also like to learn how to skype, so I could skype with my family that I don’t get to see often, and that I miss. I also want to learn how to skype because I think its fun to video chat
I can learn more about new technology and spend more time using it. I can learn about other websites. I want to learn more about what you can do online. I think it is a good idea for students to use computers and learn about them.
Brooke I would like to learn how to be faster with technology and also learn to do things that I am not sure how to use. If we do skyp, I think we should still do it to foreign people and learn about their culture. That would be cool.
I would like to learn more about skype so I can chat with my uncle. Also I want to learn more about garage band because last year it was a lot of fun but I didn’t get much time to work on it. I can pay attention in class and ask questions. If something goes wrong I will immediately ask the teacher.
Kayla In these nine weeks I would like to learn more about technology. And I would also like to learn about stuff like blogging and stuff that I don’t know anything about or would like to learn about in this computer apps. class. I also would like to learn about skype. I would like to be able to learn new thing that will help me on are projects.
Brooklynn I can prepare for the 21st century by listening and finding new ways to use technology.I will also be patient when the computer is not working. I also want to know how to write blogs and skype with others. I will try my hardest in class so i can learn new things.
I can prepare for the 21st century in computer apps by listening to what the teacher and my classmates are saying. I want to learn how to blog and skype. I would like to skype with my grandma’s foreign exchange student because she live over in Switzerland. I would also like to learn how to use all of the different technology that we are going to be using in this class.
Adri, I would like to learn about things that we would have to learn in high school. I think that if we learned some of it now it would be easy on us when we are in high school. Also blogs. I think that blogs are very interesting and I would like it if we could fined out exactly what they are. Also think we could skype and what it is all about. I would really like to be able to skype with my family that I never get to see.
I can prepare for the 21st century in computer apps by listening to what the teacher and my classmates are saying. I want to learn how to blog and skype. I would like to skype with my grandma’s foreign exchange student because she live over in Switzerland. I would also like to learn how to use all of the different technology that we are going to be using in this class.
Faith I want to learn about why are computers taking are jobs that we need. How I want to learn why they are using computers to do jobs that human can do. I also want to learn how to make a blog. I want to learn this because it would be fun to keep a blog about something that could help people with their lives. How I will do this is by paying attention to what Mrs. Anderson is teaching me about making a blog.
I can prepare for the 21st century by using the present technology. Also i can listen during class and learn new thing in computer apps/computer class. A scientist could teach and tell me what new technology is going to be coming out.
Stefania- I can prepare for this class by listening in class and understand the concepts of how technology works. I would like to learn how to create graphs, charts, and spreadsheets, which could help me in the near future.
Hannah- I can prepare for the 21st century by listening in class and when i older i will need to know a things for school and for my job that I will have in the future.
Scott- If you want to write a high level blog is to put a lot of detail and you could put a special edition. You also could put what happened in the blog if it happened. You should have a good title too. You should have good spelling and grammar.
Kywin H I Can use the 21st century learning by finding new ways to use all of the computers apps. I can also pay attention so that I can learn how to do those things. Then when technology isnt cooperating with me I fix it myself. I hope I learn a lot about the computers apps.
Trevor What I Want To Learn I want to learn how people get the idea of a computer and a phone and how they make it. I will be patient and wait for it to lode or I will retry.I will look on webs sites to try and find this information.I hope I learn a lot about this.
Charlie I can learn how to deal with modern technology in this nine weeks. i will learn what to do and not to do when technology is not cooperating. Like you should not start clicking like crazy when it freezes, but that you should be patient and it will fix itself. If everything doesn't go your way just be calm.
Response for Kayla-you could have included a catchy title. i think that you could have used other words besides stuff so much. You did a good job though explaining your topic. Your spelling and grammar was perfect. You did an o.k job at the ending, But u could have ended it a little better.
Response For: Shania Please include title Your topic sentence could be a little more than a couple of words please because when I read it,it made me feel like i didn't know what you were trying to say.Nice Job with not using the same ideas as others. As I read your blog I saw a spelling error. I think you need more details.You also should have a better conclusion.
Response for Jenna Jones! I liked your response because you included details in how you are going to prepare yourself. Your spelling and grammar was good.Overall your blog comment was really good!! GREAT JOB!!
Response for Sammie. I liked how you included differnt ideas and included specifically what you want to learn. You might want to have a title next time though. You also had a good concluding sentence and good spelling and grammar. Good job!
Response for Laura, No title please include one next time. The topic sentence could of been a little bit better, but the one you had was awesome to. Your grammar was excellent. You didn't post the same thing as someone else which was good. For provided details and ideas you did excellent on that. And your conclusion was awesome.
Response for Emma -Loved your title -Your topic sentence was good -grammar and spelling was excellent! -Maybe could have used a little more details but still pretty good -could have used a summary
Response for Rachel- Please include title. I like that you want to use Skype to chat with your uncle. That could help you guys stay in touch. Garage band sounds cool and it sounds like something fun. I think it's cool you want to learn how to use these things. I also like that you would ask the teacher immediately for help if something went wrong, but you could also ask another student and see if they also know what to do. I hope you get to learn what you want. -Sierra
Response For Rosie: Please add a title, I like your topic sentence because you say what you want to do and then you describe what you what you want.I think you could say more about what you want to do.Good job not posting the same as someone else.You did a good job using details. The spelling and grammar is right. The conclusion is good to. Sammie
Response for James: Your title needs to catch the readers eye. Your topic sentence is about what you are going to talk about but it could be a little more interesting. You provided a lot of details and examples. I don't believe you have spelled anything wrong. Good! You didn't post something that someone else has already posted. You ended with a good conclusion sentence. Laura
Response for Brooke- Please include a title. It could use a more interesting topic sentence like, "In these nine weeks...". I like that you provided details about why you would like to skype. It would be neat to learn more about foreign cultures.Please do spell checks when you are finished typing. It is nice that you put a summary at the end. -megan
response to sierra Please include title. Your topic sentence was good but could have been a little more appealing. You had really good supporting details. You did a good job not posting the same ideas as other people. All the grammar and spelling was good. The concluding sentence could be better. James
Very good thoughts about what you would like to learn in this 21st century computer class.. I thought you had a good opinion on how you would like to use the following things. I hope you do learn how to do all the things you want!!!
Response to Jessica's Comment You didn't have a title; it would have been helpful. You have a good topic sentence because it really tells me what you are going to talk about. You should have given examples on how technology is different. As far as I can see you have good spelling and grammar. You did mention skypeing and so did many other people. There wasn't a conclusion. Good Job! Marin
Next time you might want to include a catchy title.
I agree with you about learning things that we would in high school - I also want to skype too!
You may want to look over your post before you post it too. I think you meant to spell fine and put fined. I also think you left out a word between and and what.
Response for Jordan: The title could be a little more catchy. The topic sentence is very nice. It explained what you were going to talk about. The details in your paragraph are good. They tell people what you want to learn. Spelling and grammar is wonderful. Your ideas are original, but one might be the same as some one else, which I think is okay. Your conclusion sentence is alright. Possibly could have been better. Great Job! I never thought about the garage band. Your so smart!
response for Mickayla nice title but it could be more catchy You had a great topic sentence. You did a good job staying on task but you listed something that was kind of like somebody else's.You had good grammar and spelling. You had a nice conclusion too. jordan
Jenna response to James *You have an interesting title. *You have good examples and details. *Your words are spelt correctly and used the correct way. *Also you stay on your subject.
Mathew i can prepare for this class by listening and paying attention. i would like to learn as much about computers as i can, because my mom doesn't know a thing about computers so i all ways need to help her.
Kywin Hilleshiem response to Anna I think your topic sentence was good.You did a good job about talking about what you wanted to learn. You could have added some more details. Some of your information has been repeated so I think you could have added some more things. You did a good job with spelling and grammer.
Jessica had a good point by saying that technology today is much different then it was in the past. Some of her information was repeated. Jessica did a good job by sticking to the point and had some good details.
Stefania response to Brooklynn-- I think you should have included more detail in your blog comment. Some of the information has already been said , and you're topic sentence could use maybe a little revising.
Trevor response to Rosie I think you have a good topic sentence. You stayed on your topic and you talked about what you wanted to learn about. You could write a little about how would you do it and why. All of grammar and writing is spelt correctly. Some of your information has been said, but I think it is a good idea, but maybe next time you can think of something no one else thought of.
Response to Keiyah, I think it is a good idea to learn this new materials. I think it is good that you want use this to get a good job. I think it is good that you want to learn how to skype.
Ana I can prepare for the 21st century in computer applications by learning how to use new technology. You can learn about new thing and be able to post blog.
Leah I would like to learn more about 21st century technology by using technology more, and by learning about the new and advanced types. I want to learn what kind of technology helps with certain jobs, and everyday things you do around the house and community. I would also like to know how to use the new, improved, and better types of technology. I also think it would be pretty cool to learn how to make a website. I think learning how to make a website could be helpful because I could share information that I know with other kids that want to look at my website, and I could keep people updated on news and events happening around Richland Center. Don’t you think it would be cool to make your own website?
I could pay attention and be prepared for it everyday. I could work hard and learn about the 21st century in the computer class during these nine weeks.
You had a good topic sentence with a lot of details with it. You had explaining ideas that was good. Your spelling and grammar was good. The last thing you did right was that you did not post the same thing as everyone else which is also good.
-You had an title that some other people had -Great topic title - Lots of detail - Good grammar -You stayed on topic,summarized, and didn't repeat anything
Leeauna response to Anna The blog could have a topic,more information on what or how skype is used.The blog could have also had how she was going to learn.
Katie I can prepare for the twenty first century in this class by listening and learning. If i listen to the teacher i can learn about the computer and the twenty first century .
Rosie
ReplyDeleteI can prepare for this computer application class over these 9 weeks because I would hope to learn all of the computer class materials and how to do new things on the computer I didn’t know before. I will also be able to learn more things for the projects we are going to be doing. I will do my best to learn all the new materials. I would like to learn how to skype my foreign exchange student.
Brooklynn
ReplyDeleteI can prepare by listening in class and finding new ways to use technology.
Marin
ReplyDeleteI can prepare for the 21st century in this class in these 9 weeks by learning more about technology. I would like to know how to use the internet better and how to write on blogs. I want to be more efficient with computers. I also would like to learn more about skypeing with friends and using/making widgets. I can be responsible for my own learning by asking questions and paying attention.
Anna-I can prepare for the up-coming nine weeks by listening and trying my best to understand all the material. Also I can try to find new ways to learn what is being taught. I also would like to Skype with someone.
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ReplyDeleteI can prepare for the twenty first century in computer applications class by learning how to work on excel. I will try to learn everything that is taught in this class. I would like to work with i movie and garage band.
James
ReplyDeleteI can prepare for the next nine weeks by open my mind to new technology and ideas. I can try to learn more about the Internet and some of its uses. I can also learn how to use the Internet more efficiently. That is some of the things I hope to learn in this class.
Keiyah
ReplyDeleteI can prepare for the 21st century by learning more things about computers. I want to learn the information we talk about during this 9 weeks because, it can help me with things I do for school and when I get older it might help with my job. I would like to learn how to search better on the internet and to skype. I think it would be cool to be able to talk to people from around the world.
Jessica
ReplyDelete1.I can prepare by, learning new ways of how technology works. In this 21st century technology is so much different. I would like to learn new ways to explore the internet. I would like to use skype to chat with people across seas.
Laura
ReplyDeleteI cannot expect to lean back on something else like at Mc. Donald’s or something because that may be replaced with technology. Anything can be replaced with technology so when I get a job I will have to appreciate it and not take advantage of it.
Emma
ReplyDeleteI can prepare for this computer application class over these 9 weeks by listening, learning, and following instructions so that I know what to do and how to prepare myself because a lot of jobs in the 21st century include working with computers or other kinds of technology.I want to learn how to skype with people on a different continent too.
Keely
ReplyDeleteI can prepare by telling you that I want to learn more about working with word documents or power points and seeing what all they have to offer. I’d like to learn anything and everything about computers. I don’t know anything.I can raise my hand and ask a whole lot of questions.
Megan
ReplyDeleteI would like to learn more about computers, blogging, skyping, and the Internet. I would like to learn how to skype to talk to my cousin in the air force. I would like to learn how to create a blog so I can have my own blog. I think that these things will help me a lot.
Adri,
ReplyDeleteI would like to learn about things that we would have to learn in high school. I think that if we learned some of it now it would be easy on us when we are in high school. Also blogs. I think that blogs are very interesting and I would like it if we could fined out exactly what they are. Also think we could skype and what it is all about. I would really like to be able to skype with my family that I never get to see.
Sierra
ReplyDeleteI would want to learn about blogs, because I’m not sure how to use them, and I might need to in the future maybe. I want to see what there like, and if they are fun. Some people say we have to use them later in life so I would like to learn how to use them now. I would also like to learn how to skype, so I could skype with my family that I don’t get to see often, and that I miss. I also want to learn how to skype because I think its fun to video chat
Sammie
ReplyDeleteI can learn more about new technology and spend more time using it. I can learn about other websites. I want to learn more about what you can do online. I think it is a good idea for students to use computers and learn about them.
In this nine weeks I will try to problem solve a problem before i ask the teacher. In this class i also want to learn how to skype.
ReplyDeleteBrooke
ReplyDeleteI would like to learn how to be faster with technology and also learn to do things that I am not sure how to use. If we do skyp, I think we should still do it to foreign people and learn about their culture. That would be cool.
Rachel
ReplyDeleteI would like to learn more about skype so I can chat with my uncle. Also I want to learn more about garage band because last year it was a lot of fun but I didn’t get much time to work on it.
I can pay attention in class and ask questions. If something goes wrong I will immediately ask the teacher.
Kayla
ReplyDeleteIn these nine weeks I would like to learn more about technology. And I would also like to learn about stuff like blogging and stuff that I don’t know anything about or would like to learn about in this computer apps. class. I also would like to learn about skype. I would like to be able to learn new thing that will help me on are projects.
Brooklynn
ReplyDeleteI can prepare for the 21st century by listening and finding new ways to use technology.I will also be patient when the computer is not working. I also want to know how to write blogs and skype with others. I will try my hardest in class so i can learn new things.
I can prepare for the 21st century in computer apps by listening to what the teacher and my classmates are saying. I want to learn how to blog and skype. I would like to skype with my grandma’s foreign exchange student because she live over in Switzerland. I would also like to learn how to use all of the different technology that we are going to be using in this class.
ReplyDeleteAdri,
ReplyDeleteI would like to learn about things that we would have to learn in high school. I think that if we learned some of it now it would be easy on us when we are in high school. Also blogs. I think that blogs are very interesting and I would like it if we could fined out exactly what they are. Also think we could skype and what it is all about. I would really like to be able to skype with my family that I never get to see.
I can prepare for the 21st century in computer apps by listening to what the teacher and my classmates are saying. I want to learn how to blog and skype. I would like to skype with my grandma’s foreign exchange student because she live over in Switzerland. I would also like to learn how to use all of the different technology that we are going to be using in this class.
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ReplyDeleteI can prepare by listening the best I can in class and try to fing new ways to use technology. I will also always be a guide on the side.
Faith
ReplyDeleteI want to learn about why are computers taking are jobs that we need. How I want to learn why they are using computers to do jobs that human can do. I also want to learn how to make a blog. I want to learn this because it would be fun to keep a blog about something that could help people with their lives. How I will do this is by paying attention to what Mrs. Anderson is teaching me about making a blog.
Jenna,
ReplyDeleteI can prepare for the 21st century by using the present technology. Also i can listen during class and learn new thing in computer apps/computer class. A scientist could teach and tell me what new technology is going to be coming out.
Stefania-
ReplyDeleteI can prepare for this class by listening in class and understand the concepts of how technology works. I would like to learn how to create graphs, charts, and spreadsheets, which could help me in the near future.
Hannah-
ReplyDeleteI can prepare for the 21st century by listening in class and when i older i will need to know a things for school and for my job that I will have in the future.
Scott-
ReplyDeleteIf you want to write a high level blog is to put a lot of detail and you could put a special edition. You also could put what happened in the blog if it happened. You should have a good title too. You should have good spelling and grammar.
Kywin H
ReplyDeleteI Can use the 21st century learning by finding new ways to use all of the computers apps. I can also pay attention so that I can learn how to do those things. Then when technology isnt cooperating with me I fix it myself. I hope I learn a lot about the computers apps.
Trevor
ReplyDeleteWhat I Want To Learn
I want to learn how people get the idea of a computer and a phone and how they make it. I will be patient and wait for it to lode or I will retry.I will look on webs sites to try and find this information.I hope I learn a lot about this.
Charlie
ReplyDeleteI can learn how to deal with modern technology in this nine weeks. i will learn what to do and not to do when technology is not cooperating. Like you should not start clicking like crazy when it freezes, but that you should be patient and it will fix itself. If everything doesn't go your way just be calm.
Response for Kayla-you could have included a catchy title. i think that you could have used other words besides stuff so much. You did a good job though explaining your topic. Your spelling and grammar was perfect. You did an o.k job at the ending, But u could have ended it a little better.
ReplyDeleteResponse for Hannah:
ReplyDelete-Please include title
-Could use work on grammar
-You did a good job on giving examples
-You didn't post the same thing as anyone else
-Good Job!!
Response For: Shania
ReplyDeletePlease include title
Your topic sentence could be a little more than a couple of words please because when I read it,it made me feel like i didn't know what you were trying to say.Nice Job with not using the same ideas as others. As I read your blog I saw a spelling error. I think you need more details.You also should have a better conclusion.
Response for Jenna Jones! I liked your response because you included details in how you are going to prepare yourself. Your spelling and grammar was good.Overall your blog comment was really good!! GREAT JOB!!
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Response for Sammie. I liked how you included differnt ideas and included specifically what you want to learn. You might want to have a title next time though. You also had a good concluding sentence and good spelling and grammar. Good job!
ReplyDeleteResponse for Laura,
ReplyDeleteNo title please include one next time. The topic sentence could of been a little bit better, but the one you had was awesome to. Your grammar was excellent. You didn't post the same thing as someone else which was good. For provided details and ideas you did excellent on that. And your conclusion was awesome.
Response for Emma
ReplyDelete-Loved your title
-Your topic sentence was good
-grammar and spelling was excellent!
-Maybe could have used a little more details but still pretty good
-could have used a summary
Response for Rachel-
ReplyDeletePlease include title. I like that you want to use Skype to chat with your uncle. That could help you guys stay in touch. Garage band sounds cool and it sounds like something fun. I think it's cool you want to learn how to use these things. I also like that you would ask the teacher immediately for help if something went wrong, but you could also ask another student and see if they also know what to do. I hope you get to learn what you want.
-Sierra
Response For Rosie:
ReplyDeletePlease add a title, I like your topic sentence because you say what you want to do and then you describe what
you what you want.I think you could say more about what you want to do.Good job not posting the same as someone else.You did a good job using details. The spelling and grammar is right. The conclusion is good to.
Sammie
Response for James:
ReplyDeleteYour title needs to catch the readers eye.
Your topic sentence is about what you are going to talk about but it could be a little more interesting.
You provided a lot of details and examples.
I don't believe you have spelled anything wrong. Good!
You didn't post something that someone else has already posted.
You ended with a good conclusion sentence.
Laura
Response for Brooke-
ReplyDeletePlease include a title. It could use a more interesting topic sentence like, "In these nine weeks...". I like that you provided details about why you would like to skype. It would be neat to learn more about foreign cultures.Please do spell checks when you are finished typing. It is nice that you put a summary at the end.
-megan
response to sierra
ReplyDeletePlease include title.
Your topic sentence was good but could have been a little more appealing.
You had really good supporting details.
You did a good job not posting the same ideas as other people.
All the grammar and spelling was good.
The concluding sentence could be better.
James
Response for Faith
ReplyDeleteNext time could you please include a catchy title.
Next time, before you post, be sure to read over your sentences before you post. Some of them have extra words that could be taken out.
Great job on spelling.
I would like it if your ending was more of a conclusion.
If you could use examples such as, how computers are taking jobs
Excellent job.
Response to Marin
ReplyDeleteVery good thoughts about what you would like to learn in this 21st century computer class.. I thought you had a good opinion on how you would like to use the following things. I hope you do learn how to do all the things you want!!!
Rosie Smith
Response to Jessica's Comment
ReplyDeleteYou didn't have a title; it would have been helpful. You have a good topic sentence because it really tells me what you are going to talk about. You should have given examples on how technology is different. As far as I can see you have good spelling and grammar. You did mention skypeing and so did many other people. There wasn't a conclusion. Good Job!
Marin
Response for Adri
ReplyDeleteNext time you might want to include a catchy title.
I agree with you about learning things that we would in high school - I also want to skype too!
You may want to look over your post before you post it too.
I think you meant to spell fine and put fined.
I also think you left out a word between and and what.
Good blog post!
~Emma R.
Response for Jordan:
ReplyDeleteThe title could be a little more catchy. The topic sentence is very nice. It explained what you were going to talk about. The details in your paragraph are good. They tell people what you want to learn. Spelling and grammar is wonderful. Your ideas are original, but one might be the same as some one else, which I think is okay. Your conclusion sentence is alright. Possibly could have been better. Great Job! I never thought about the garage band. Your so smart!
response for Mickayla
ReplyDeletenice title but it could be more catchy
You had a great topic sentence.
You did a good job staying on task but you listed something that was kind of like somebody else's.You had good grammar and spelling. You had a nice conclusion too.
jordan
Jenna response to James
ReplyDelete*You have an interesting title.
*You have good examples and details.
*Your words are spelt correctly and used the correct way.
*Also you stay on your subject.
Mathew
ReplyDeletei can prepare for this class by listening and paying attention. i would like to learn as much about computers as i can, because my mom doesn't know a thing about computers so i all ways need to help her.
Shania response to Jordan
ReplyDeleteYou have a very interesting title/topic sentance. I like how you have examples on what you would like to do. I also think you have very good detail.
Jordon
ReplyDeleteI prepare by listening and paying attention and I want to lean every thing I can about computers and how to skype.
Kywin Hilleshiem response to Anna
ReplyDeleteI think your topic sentence was good.You did a good job about talking about what you wanted to learn. You could have added some more details. Some of your information has been repeated so I think you could have added some more things. You did a good job with spelling and grammer.
Leah-Response to Jessica
ReplyDeleteJessica had a good point by saying that technology today is much different then it was in the past. Some of her information was repeated. Jessica did a good job by sticking to the point and had some good details.
Stefania response to Brooklynn--
ReplyDeleteI think you should have included more detail in your blog comment. Some of the information has already been said , and you're topic sentence could use maybe a little revising.
Trevor response to Rosie
ReplyDeleteI think you have a good topic sentence. You stayed on your topic and you talked about what you wanted to learn about. You could write a little about how would you do it and why. All of grammar and writing is spelt correctly. Some of your information has been said, but I think it is a good idea, but maybe next time you can think of something no one else thought of.
Response to Keiyah,
ReplyDeleteI think it is a good idea to learn this new materials. I think it is good that you want use this to get a good job. I think it is good that you want to learn how to skype.
Ana
ReplyDeleteI can prepare for the 21st century in computer applications by learning how to use new technology. You can learn about new thing and be able to post blog.
Leah
ReplyDeleteI would like to learn more about 21st century technology by using technology more, and by learning about the new and advanced types. I want to learn what kind of technology helps with certain jobs, and everyday things you do around the house and community. I would also like to know how to use the new, improved, and better types of technology. I also think it would be pretty cool to learn how to make a website. I think learning how to make a website could be helpful because I could share information that I know with other kids that want to look at my website, and I could keep people updated on news and events happening around Richland Center. Don’t you think it would be cool to make your own website?
Charlie
ReplyDeleteResponse to Derrick
Derrick good idea to blog about but you forgot somethings like your catchy title
Derrick
ReplyDeleteI could pay attention and be prepared for it everyday.
I could work hard and learn about the 21st century in the computer class during these nine weeks.
Derrick Green
ReplyDeleteYou had a good topic sentence with a lot of details with it. You had explaining ideas that was good. Your spelling and grammar was good. The last thing you did right was that you did not post the same thing as everyone else which is also good.
Hannah response to Keiyah
ReplyDelete-You had an title that some other people had
-Great topic title
- Lots of detail
- Good grammar
-You stayed on topic,summarized, and didn't repeat anything
Great job!
Leeauna response to Anna
ReplyDeleteThe blog could have a topic,more information on what or how skype is used.The blog could have also had how she was going to learn.
Good job. Could use more detail. There were a few things that others said that you also said. But over all. Good job.
ReplyDelete8rms1047
ReplyDeleteYou need to check spelling next time. Other than that you did a very good job.
Faith
Jordon to Mathew
ReplyDeleteYou need a more catchy title and your topic is good like really like it
mathew to jordon j
ReplyDeleteyou need a catchier title but and you need more details but your topic sentence is pretty good.
Christine to Brooklyn
ReplyDeleteIthink you did a good job on yours and it it smart that you prepare for it.
Katie
ReplyDeleteI can prepare for the twenty first century in this class by listening and learning. If i listen to the teacher i can learn about the computer and the twenty first century .